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Genre: any except RPF ( real person fics)
Pairings: het, slash, femslash
Strengths: spelling, punctuation, grammar, and giving ideas
Weaknesses: british english
Contact: ogradyhotty@gmail.com
Fanfiction.net  and Fictionpress.com penname: 7 Ace

I really need a beta for this!

Title: Pinch Me
Characters/Pairing: Roxas/Axel, Sora
Rating: A light R for glossed-over sex?
Word Count: 16,000; completed first draft
Summary: Mostly angst, with a little bit of fluff here and there, but still manages to have a happy ending. Next Life. When Roxas dragged Axel to help him spend a week house-sitting his childhood home he thought he’d be happy, but ghosts tend to linger in this old house, and it is harder to escape the past than one might think. Not quite a songfic, but based on the song “Pinch Me” by the Barenaked Ladies.
Notes: This is a one-shot, actually (Yes, I know it's super long). For the curious, the house actually exists.

I'm basically looking for a beta in the areas of pacing and characterization. I've spellchecked everything already, and my grammar is usually pretty good, but feel free to point out any mistakes. Since this thing is so long, I'm not quite sure how to post it. if anyone volunteers, I'll probably just email it to you or something.

Any help would be very much appreciated!

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Beta for Roxas fic

Hello all! I'm looking for a beta revolving around Next-Life Roxas, with sides of Axel and Sora.

Title: Pinch Me
Characters/Pairing: Roxas/Axel, Sora
Rating: PG, unless someone gets a potty mouth later in the fic (looking at you, Axel)
Word Count: 1150, but it's only about 1/3 or 1/4 of the way done right now.
Summary: Mostly angst, with a little bit of fluff here and there. Next Life. When Roxas dragged Axel to help him spend a week house-sitting his childhood home he thought he’d be happy, but ghosts tend to linger in this old house, and it is harder to escape the past than one might think. Not a songfic, but based on the song “Pinch Me” by the Barenaked Ladies.
Notes: This is the fist part of a longer one-shot. For the curious, the fic takes place in Syracuse, NY.

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Title: Bolvangar [I’m taking suggestions]
Rating: PG
Wordcount: ~1500
Notes: For the first time I’m wandering out of the limits of canon, with an AU I’ve been plotting for a while. I really want to make it a multichaptered story... Here would be the prologue/first chapter.
What kind of beta I’m looking for: As usual, I try hard to make everything understandable even for readers who don’t know the books, so you are all invited to beta my grammar/verb tenses/phrase structures (they probably really need it). However if you happen to be familiar with HDM, I’d be very curious to also know your opinion about the logic of this crossover.

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Beta for angsty...thing?

I love this comm already. This is the first time I've ever asked for a beta, so forgive any newbie mistakes! I'm looking for general constructive criticism and deeper thoughts if you can be bothered, especially on the second chapter. Thankyou in advance!

First Chapter- Scattered Light.
Paring: Implied Sora/Roxas. I'm unsure if it counts as incest or not...
Rating: First chapter is NC-17 for YAOI and swearing.
A/N. Lots of implications and many assumptions needed.

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Second Chapter- Scattered Light Deux.
Paring: Implied Sora/Roxas, Sora/Riku, Axel/Roxas.
Rating: M...or maybe NC-17 for boy/boy loving.
A/N. Lots of implications and many assumptions needed.

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Beta for a crossover of crack?

Here I offer you another crossover, this time with the Thursday Next series. The crackbunny, it is strong. I’m not familiar with the series in English and I have only read two of the books, so for those who know: could you please tell me if the TN elements sound right as well? (along with the grammar and the KH stuff, of course…)  As usual, you don't really have to read the books to understand what's going on; it's just a bonus.
…The fact that Merlin and the Cheshire Cat know each other may be somehow related to the introduction of Worldrefugees in my life. I DON’T KNOW. 

Title: The Bear Affair
Rating: G
Wordcount: ~1200 


Thanks in advance :)

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Riku/Sora Fic

I'm hoping someone doesn't mind betaing this for me, I has no beta so it'd be appreciated ^_^ It's boy/boy so also hope that's no problem. Thank you in advance. 3>

Rating: PG-13/TEEN for homosexual themes, and two curse words.
Word Count: Somewhere over 3'000.

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Not Good Enough

This will be my first KH fanfic, hopefully it won't be too bad. Here goes nothing

Title: Not Good Enough
Summary: For some people, “he'll be like a good friend who's gone away for a year,” just isn’t good enough.
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 1250

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Sorta fic.

This was written very hastily, so expect mistakes everywhere. 'Tis just an idea that popped into my head. BE WARNED, FOR I HAVE YET TO GET USED TO WRITING KH FANFICTION.

Characters: Kairi, Roxas.
Title: Conversations.

London's Trail (2/2)

Here I come again, this time with an experiment that may or may not evolve in a multi-chaptered fic one day~

Title: London’s trail
Genre: Gen
Rating: G
Wordcount: ~3700
Notes: this is a crossover with Neverwhere, by Neil Gaiman. I don’t think you have to read the book to understand the fic, but it’s a great book, so read it anyway!
Since it’s a bit long, I’m dividing the story in two posts to make it easier for you. Here’s part two. (Go to part one)

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