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I really need a beta for this!

Title: Pinch Me
Characters/Pairing: Roxas/Axel, Sora
Rating: A light R for glossed-over sex?
Word Count: 16,000; completed first draft
Summary: Mostly angst, with a little bit of fluff here and there, but still manages to have a happy ending. Next Life. When Roxas dragged Axel to help him spend a week house-sitting his childhood home he thought he’d be happy, but ghosts tend to linger in this old house, and it is harder to escape the past than one might think. Not quite a songfic, but based on the song “Pinch Me” by the Barenaked Ladies.
Notes: This is a one-shot, actually (Yes, I know it's super long). For the curious, the house actually exists.

I'm basically looking for a beta in the areas of pacing and characterization. I've spellchecked everything already, and my grammar is usually pretty good, but feel free to point out any mistakes. Since this thing is so long, I'm not quite sure how to post it. if anyone volunteers, I'll probably just email it to you or something.

Any help would be very much appreciated!

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